Wilted Love

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  • Sadness
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  • Lost Love
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  • Emotional

    Poem Commentary

    This was inspired by my own experience and also the daily poetry challenge on the boards! Thanks for the great inspiration!

    Wilted Love

    My love, alas our love has wilted.

    The violin is playing a sad song

    If only I didn't feel so jilted

    Today we could be going strong.



    The petals they have fallen

    Upon the open ground

    This pain it has befallen

    And I'm afraid it can not be found.


    One too many times
     
    This hurt I have endured

    It feels like I have committed many crimes

    This feeling can not be cured.



    If only I could show you

    The bruises on my heart

    You'd know that what I said was true

    And give me a fresh start.



    But until that day shall come

    The petals they remain

    And slowly I succumb

    For never have I felt such pain.

     


     

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    1990lh commented on Wilted Love

    08-21-2009

    ww that really deep and a little sad ful of so much emotion i really enjoyed reading this. great write
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    Alexia

    10/13/2009

    aww thank your sweet

    jademelissa74 commented on Wilted Love

    07-28-2009

    Poetically rich. I love the passion in which you convey your loss. You manage to keep a level of interest. Great job Alexia!
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    Alexia

    07/28/2009

    Thank you as always your comments are too kind. I appreciate them all.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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