Oceanic Memories

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I wrote this using the ocean challenge on the boards.

Oceanic Memories

Here I stand in the middle of the turf,
Listening to the sound of the surf,
Letting the waves crash all around me,
At this moment I feel completely set free,
I let Jesus take away my cares,
And let him mend every tear,
In this moment I find peace,
All the chaos of this world seems to cease,
As I let this moment enfold me.

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ginga commented on Oceanic Memories

07-28-2009

Alexis, Simplistic in its style and message but complicated in the mind's eye of the poet who lives it. A pure succinct message. ginga

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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