Forever Yearning

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  • Death

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    I wrote this poem for a character of mine who I am writing a book about. Her true love dies, and she just finds out. Let me know what you think.

    Forever Yearning

    Today, my heart was torn,
    Forever for you, shall I mourn,
    As I heard the news,
    My heart was more than bruised.

    My whole world shook,
    A last glance at you, I have not took,
    My eyes are forever shrouded,
    And my brain more than a little clouded.

    There are pieces of my heart,
    That will no longer take part,
    Of the wheels that are turning,
    For I am forever yearning.

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    gogant commented on Forever Yearning

    01-27-2010

    The poem you write here, Alexia, is a special kind of poem...the person you speak of must have been completely devastated. Really a well written piece.........................................................gogant
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    Alexia

    01/27/2010

    Thank you you are spoiling me with your compliments.

    dahlusion commented on Forever Yearning

    01-27-2010

    A poetic love cry from the torn heart of a lover. Beautiful!!
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    Alexia

    01/27/2010

    Thank you dahlusion! I am happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for taking the time to come read my poems.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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