Mash

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    Mash

    Mash
    I never intended to be everything I hate.
    So I can’t keep out the cold for very much longer.
    My faith and hope in myself dwindled as my 
    Distaste for my ways grew stronger. 
    I’m sorry, I feel as if I can’t do anything right.
    I’m the one falling apart because of my own pain.
    I picked myself apart again….
    I, by myself, am my only punisher.
    Against most wishes of those around me,
    I destroy myself again…and again.
    It’s been so long since I’ve felt this bad.
    I care, but I can’t bring myself to stop.
    The trust I’ve been gaining for so long,
    Falls to pieces again, I’m truly sorry.
    So feel free to take a hit,
    A chip off the old block. 
    You seem to learn more about me…
    With every turn.
    My world is spinning out of control,
    Who knows what I’ll do tomorrow,
    If I stay long enough to see it?
    I can feel the breakdown,
    Such a waste, I know…
    The look on your face,
    I’ve disappointed you yet again.
    Tell me, how much harder do I have to
    Try?
    This must mean I’ve finally reached it.
    The end is calling, my deaf ears can’t help
    But pick it up.
    Will I keep true to this deathly path? 
    Or will I end it before it can truly begin?
    ~Kaitlin Platti~
    Mash
    I never intended to be everything I hate.
    So I can’t keep out the cold for very much longer.
    My faith and hope in myself dwindled as my 
    Distaste for my ways grew stronger. 
    I’m sorry, I feel as if I can’t do anything right.
    I’m the one falling apart because of my own pain.
    I picked myself apart again….
    I, by myself, am my only punisher.
    Against most wishes of those around me,
    I destroy myself again…and again.
    It’s been so long since I’ve felt this bad.
    I care, but I can’t bring myself to stop.
    The trust I’ve been gaining for so long,
    Falls to pieces again, I’m truly sorry.
    So feel free to take a hit,
    A chip off the old block. 
    You seem to learn more about me…
    With every turn.
    My world is spinning out of control,
    Who knows what I’ll do tomorrow,
    If I stay long enough to see it?
    I can feel the breakdown,
    Such a waste, I know…
    The look on your face,
    I’ve disappointed you yet again.
    Tell me, how much harder do I have to
    Try?
    This must mean I’ve finally reached it.
    The end is calling, my deaf ears can’t help
    But pick it up.
    Will I keep true to this deathly path? 
    Or will I end it before it can truly begin?
    ~Kaitlin Platti~

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    Tempy commented on Mash

    05-13-2010

    this was like reading my mind. thankyou for the read

    Platti

    05/13/2010

    Thank YOU for the comment!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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