Down

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I really can't deal with it anymore

Down

Down, far into the darkness,
I fear I’m falling,
Not strong enough to find the light,
Too tired to care where it is,
Time was never on my side,
I’m too stubborn to listen,
It’s all dragging me down again,
I can’t help myself,
Every time I reach for you,
I catch nothing.
A ghost of the past I can’t shake.
I’m tired of crying,
I’m tired of lying, saying everything’s fine.
Nobody’s there to listen,
I always turn to the worst ways.
I promised one too many I’d never…
Spiral down,
Lose sight of what I’ve always
Prided myself in,
I promised one too many I’d never 
Forget where I come from,
How to be myself,
When to just let go,
How to be strong,
Where to lay my tired head,
And what to say when I’m at 
A loss.
I can’t keep them, 
I can’t hold my head up high,
I can’t remember why I tried in the first place.
I can’t promise I won’t be gone tomorrow.
~Kaitlin Platti~
Down, far into the darkness,
I fear I’m falling,
Not strong enough to find the light,
Too tired to care where it is,
Time was never on my side,
I’m too stubborn to listen,
It’s all dragging me down again,
I can’t help myself,
Every time I reach for you,
I catch nothing.
A ghost of the past I can’t shake.
I’m tired of crying,
I’m tired of lying, saying everything’s fine.
Nobody’s there to listen,
I always turn to the worst ways.
I promised one too many I’d never…
Spiral down,
Lose sight of what I’ve always
Prided myself in,
I promised one too many I’d never 
Forget where I come from,
How to be myself,
When to just let go,
How to be strong,
Where to lay my tired head,
And what to say when I’m at 
A loss.
I can’t keep them, 
I can’t hold my head up high,
I can’t remember why I tried in the first place.
I can’t promise I won’t be gone tomorrow.
~Kaitlin Platti~

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dahlusion commented on Down

02-23-2010

When you decide to come up for light, you will see that you are in charge of your life by way of your thoughts. Peace and Light, Dah

Platti

02/23/2010

Why thank you Dah :)

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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