Vampire Kiss

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    This is what it feels like to be kissed by a Vampire- Hard to resist.

    Vampire Kiss

    Anchored in your timeless velvet embrace

    locked within your gaze

    my soul flew away to an archaic place

    a trace of your dark heart was all that was offered

    a lifetime vanished and eons ripped by

    as you plunged your thirsty growl

    reaching hot bloody nectar just beneath the surface

    swirling in cavernous holds within and bursting through

    thrust into oblivion

    buckling in delirious swoon

    love sickened with your hallucinogen

    then absent of all,

    wilted as a wasted flower

    fragrant only with passion's quiet thunder

    flight became you

     -M. Jacobs

     

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    ginga commented on Vampire Kiss

    01-14-2011

    jake, Sensuous and taboo, this poem on how vampires kiss, seemingly comes fgrom one who has experienced it. ginga
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    danmartyjake1

    01/15/2011

    Experienced it through a dream that felt absolutely real.... interestingly enough, so that I was able to lock those feelings into words. TY

    LenaM commented on Vampire Kiss

    01-13-2011

    I agree with kah that this ought to be entered into Poets of Blood forum for the Bleed For a Cause, Vol 2 - this is masterfully written a 10 from me and into my favs
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    LenaM

    01/13/2011

    this is the link for the forum you need http://www.originalpoetry.com/forum/view/topic/topic_id/4336

    danmartyjake1

    01/14/2011

    Thanks for the supportive words and link. Smiles!

    WordSlinger commented on Vampire Kiss

    01-13-2011

    This is good as it gets I think the ending is masterfully written, much to appreciate, very good, ty WS
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    danmartyjake1

    01/14/2011

    Coming from you, that's a high compliment! I always like your poems. Many thanks!

    HarverTomsson commented on Vampire Kiss

    01-13-2011

    She knew that he could ride her buck So she never bucked his ride 'Twas a vampire's crafty crimson suck That stole what her heart denied. Some women pray for those that'd take What virtue can't display It's only then that they'd partake In any celebratiing way.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/13/2011

    Wow! I like your response to "Vampire Kiss". Cool! Thank You!

    gogant commented on Vampire Kiss

    01-12-2011

    AAAAhhhh, my kind of poetry.......You have a way with bringing out the best of us vampires, my dear..........Unique and splendid...
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    danmartyjake1

    01/12/2011

    Thanks, I am pleased you enjoyed it. Thanks for checking it out.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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