Angels Had Songs

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    Lasting Love and Fantasy Lives On.

    Angels Had Songs

     Angels Had Songs

     

    Angels had songs and they sung them to me

    I knew of you and you knew of me

    Dust off your fallen pride

    Mend the torn

    I will spread my wings, shelter you from the fiery storm

     

    Look into my eyes, see my soul

    We have known each other since days of old

    Beyond the darkness and the fright

    There is beauty, bliss and light

     

    We are meant to share all this

    We are at the precipice

    Do not let go of my hand, I will not let you fall

    Survivors we are, we walk before we crawl

     

    Stand fast with me

    Break free from all anxiety

    Ahead the lovely gates, nestled in the morning light

    Our destiny awaits, just within our sight

     

    -M. Jacobs

    (For Danny)

     

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    calliope commented on Angels Had Songs

    01-07-2010

    I loved this and the flow was superb just as the story was,i also love this title its catches the eye
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    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Angels Had Songs

    12-21-2009

    Sorry about the typo I meant to say Thank you ( my key board needs replaced.)
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    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    i figured it out.ty.

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on Angels Had Songs

    12-21-2009

    This is a very beauitful poem. We injoyed reading.Thanl you.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/21/2009

    So glad you enjoyed it. ty

    Marsink commented on Angels Had Songs

    12-15-2009

    A wondrous acclaim of solace and sacrifice, in the gait of tenderly set phrase and imagery
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    danmartyjake1

    12/15/2009

    Thanks Mars, for reading thta one too. i just posted it last week. You picked some unique ones to read. ty

    bluewolf commented on Angels Had Songs

    12-15-2009

    This world in which we reside, man’s creational myth, is but a stepping stone into eternal bliss. Your poetic incantation is a spiritual reminder that faith, hope and peace await out passing from this world into that of eternity.
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    danmartyjake1

    12/15/2009

    Wow, thanks for that perspective. i appreciate you reading it and your commentary.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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