Feathers & Light

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    It came over me so fast, had to write it!

    Feathers & Light

     Feathers & Light

    Feathers and light

    Danced the last glance of you in the night

    Songs and swells in crushing fevers

    Changed me in an instant from within your sight

     

    Loves arrow arcs into the heart

    Hanging on last breath far from the start

    Affixed the gaze was burned indelible

    The remnants of stubbornness engaged the spark

     

    The tempest roared despite attempted suppression

    Released the storm was pure aggression

    Beyond delight was the known progression

    Eternity was the connection

     

    -M. Jacobs


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    dahlusion commented on Feathers & Light

    01-11-2010

    Beautiful, simply beautiful. I am so patient with my dreams, because this is where I see my surreal-lovers.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/11/2010

    I gathered that and I too play within my dreams. Thanks for sharing..

    bklynrizz commented on Feathers & Light

    01-06-2010

    A unique descriptive way to express a sensual encounter. Nicely done.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/07/2010

    Thanks bklynrizz, you got it and it came from a dream encounter, as well.

    countrypoet commented on Feathers & Light

    01-06-2010

    This is a very interesting and thought provoking perspective on love.Very nicely written and quite enjoyable to read. Terry
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    danmartyjake1

    01/06/2010

    Though the poem was written very quickly the words came so suddenly to me that I had to write them immediately, it feels timeless to me as I read it now, and it is somewhat soothing to me. Thanks for reading it and commenting on it, I appreciate your perspective.

    Rygar commented on Feathers & Light

    12-31-2009

    your way with words is evident and shines through this poem, another great write.... careful though, now i EXPECT to be amazed by you...no pressure :P
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    danmartyjake1

    01/05/2010

    Many thanks for that lovely compliment. I hope I can enchant you, the reader, with more and more. I too, feel amazed and in awe of the other poets here and am continuously inspired. Your prose is some of my favorite to read.

    HarverTomsson commented on Feathers & Light

    12-30-2009

    It isn't incubus if its just a dream. But if there is a digital photo of it, look out! But around the watercooler can you imagine the silence when you start with, "I was seduced by someone in my sleep last night..." HT
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    danmartyjake1

    12/31/2009

    It actually has happened many times that I was seduced in a dream like state and wrote about it as I awakened. Read "Passions Dark Embrace" which was an account of just such an experience. I hope you enjoy it. Ty

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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