The Lake Walk

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    Scotland has man beautiful lakes well cared for, and my poem is about one of my favorites as I share with you a stroll around it's path walk so prepare to be at least an hour as we take in some of the joys of nature.  I hope you enjoy life as I do. I will share some peanuts you can help feed the birds as they land at your feet.

    The Lake Walk

    One of the greatest pleasures in life, of lovely things to do,
    Is to walk around a wooded lake, and to just take in the view.
    The shaded path, so filled with life, from the water to the trees;
    Each time we go, miraculous change, of what our vision sees.
    We always carry peanuts that are especially prepared
    For the bluetits and small finches, with whom are gladly shared.
    They hide amongst the bushes and shrubs, who, unseen by all,
    Show themselves when hearing; short whistles and our call.
    They are so fast and flighty and around the shores abound,
    Feeding on our foodstuffs, and the morsels, on the ground.
    But high up in the shaded trees are larger fowl and bird;
    Resting in the branches, calling out in special word
    Both signalling and warning, just in case no one had heard.
    But, who would harm one feather, on a precious little bird?
    Several swans are swimming in a cove, as we walk past
    Their necks erect, while gazing, but we know, it will not last.
    The mallard ducks come into view, their offspring at their rear
    Trailing in a row behind, all eight have naught to fear.
    They go to fetch a crust of bread that I so clumsily toss;
    The 'vee' trails in the water made, as they, all cut across.
    Each corner that, as we approach, brings on a different view;
    Nature at its' Very best, did I mention Flowers too?
    Fragrances, all fill the air, just like the sweet perfume.
    Of the pretty blossoms that are spread, in their fullest bloom.
    A squirrel might chatter loudly as it hides around a limb
    Preferring a nut, rather than bread; not wanting to take a swim.
    A stork stands proudly stalking, in the shallows, near a bog
    Watching for the movement, of a minnow, or baby frog.
    We always walk so slowly, each time we take this stroll,
    To watch all the activity; some things we might not know!
    My camera is always with me, and around my neck it's found
    At the mention of a lake walk, my feet jump to the ground!

                                            --les peoples [satch]

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    SilverGirl commented on The Lake Walk

    07-16-2009

    What a perfectly delightful poem.. I enjoyed reading it.. It took me to a place I would much rather be.. ahh beautiful nature.. to write of it..and so eloquently, how could one go wrong? thank YOU for sharing satch.. this is very lovely.. Hugs.. SG

    satch

    07/16/2009

    Thanks silver, I respect your comments and love your writings so believe in you. You are very kind in your comments and I feel I'm listening to an expert in reading your works. Hopefully you will be greatly rewarded, either here or there' blessings, satch

    WinterFrost commented on The Lake Walk

    07-15-2009

    Ok it rhymes! For easier reading you may want to break it into 4 or 6 line rhyming stanzas. Good effort!

    satch

    07/16/2009

    Thank you winter for your comment. I strive to shorten my poem to a single page , I get in trouble with 'Office Word' if I get two pages, and sometimes lose it All! bad scene and can't remember it again.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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