Nakedness

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    Best check yourself out before exposing all'   Mother Nature can play dirty tricks when your appetite gets out of hand, but beautiful bodies can be defused by blemishes as we know , so laugh along at what I wrote.

    Nakedness

    Whenever a person hears this term, thoughts will toss and turn,
    Wondering what goes on, inside their mind.
    Some thoughts are simply filled with lust, to take a look, they simply must;
    And to view, anticipating what's to find.

    Imagination, can play it's part, wishful thinking, also found;
    Hope will then invade the mind, that can only be desire;
    When the garb departs and the truth revealed, eyes scanning up and down,
    moles, birthmarks, blebs are found, not things that will inspire.

    Rolls of fat pop out in view and you can't believe your eyes,
    Dimples and ridges and valleys exposed; you can only wonder,
    How Mother nature, really could make, this bad and awful blunder
    But, we can keep it all mashed flat, in clothes, discrete disguise!

    People with morals will turn away, pretend they didn't see,
    Like the younger set, I can bet, the people like you and me
    We know, and truthfully understand, the problem it can cause
    Invasion of ones privacy is a reason to stop and pause.

    Some think today that wearing no clothes is a personal right
    Going nude in public is fine, if it's in their sight..
    But the rights and decency of others, isn't taken into view
    Segregated beaches and parks we see things now, as new.

    When we entered this world we weren't wearing no clothes;
    When we leave; suit and tie, not lacking,
    Is it an impression, that we're trying to make,
    So that St. Peter won't send us packing?

    To keep it on or to take it off, the choice is up to you;
    Is anyone's idea of how big is your 'yoo hoo.'
    So, if you decide to squint your eye to get a better look
    The choice is always yours of course, it's simply a point of view!

                                                - les peoples

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    SilverGirl commented on Nakedness

    07-13-2009

    lol.. I love this.. though, I may never get naked again in front of anyone.. hehe Hugs SilverGirl

    PRober commented on Nakedness

    07-11-2009

    atta boy! you go! Great poem, one of the best I've read so far! Write on!

    satch

    07/12/2009

    Thanks bunches PRober, You're Way too kind. Some days I get better feed into my mind--some call it inspiration' Thanks for the encouragement1 it helps motivate me Tks again! --les [satch]

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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