"Ragged Knees"

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Sometimes it just takes more words to complete the story.
No intensions to slander some who may take offence at the language but I grew up around it and my best friends were black.  More trusted and dependable than most my neighbors  I dedicate the poem to all my friends who know me and where my heart is, Hopefully it will be enjoyed if you have imagination.   -les

"Ragged Knees"

Youse chill'n all fetch yoself ovah by me, n' set yo bodies down
Iffen yo can't toat up a cheah, den rest upon da groun'
I'se gonna tell yo bout Heaben an Hell so's youse can allus knows
Hutch yo gonna do afore youse die so's ya Knows whear youse will go'
My Mammy did splain ta me one time when I'z was jes a child
I wud be judged fo bad things I did,  so's not ta be so wild.
My Pappy died when I jes three so Mammy den had ta take
In. da washin,n ironin and scrubbin floors, den bread fo Us, she'd bake
Wore hand down clothes weeze glad ta get; heppin uders wit dare chores,
We'ze nebbah did has no money, so yo couldn't call us poor.
Dem pants I wore nebbah reached da floor I cud allus feel a breeze
Special e' wit dem ragged big holes, dat wass in boff da knees.
Dat wass how I'ze gots mah name,da 'Ragged Knees' I wass called;
No one ta blame, I was ashamed, but I nev-vah ev-vah bawled.
Mammy worked hard araisin foah kids, in a tattered one room shack
She nevvah had no time ta sew, bare' kept clothes on our back
Sister Sarah, on Sunday morn after fritters and sorguhum was et
Let Mammt lay in, and she wash our face, an git our shirt all wet!
When Mammy gots up she has a big smile, we kno's she had a dream,
Bout no body be sick, no cotton ta pick, as she spoke her eyes would gleem'
Us kids wide eyed assed iffen she'd died as it now, were bearly seben;
What time a day can yo feel dis way, yo mind on thoughts of Heaben?
Our churchhouse was down da road a piece, a twenty minute walk,
Mammy toted her bible along, but some o da pages was lost.
Iffen weeze lucky nuff, ta get a pew, by a person dat cud read
Wud point to to da verses dat was read-the peace was real indeed.
Heaben is real and so is Hell ass' the bebil he do know;
He tryin hard ta git us but Mammy taught us, 'doan be slo'
To bow yer head and close yo eyes an den da words will flow;
Tell God yo is sorry fo da mess, but now yous' come ta know
Dat Jesus take away Allus our sin, makin our heart white as snow.
And when we dies it will be no surprise when weze walkin streets a' gold!
While da Devil is chained in da middle da earth, till dat day arrive;
Boff da demon helpers will be throwed, inna lake o fires'...Alive!
Dat will burn and burn fo-ebah cus deres no body ta put it out
In misery, pain an agonny they will fo'ebbah scream and shout!



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nikki78 commented on "Ragged Knees"

07-11-2009

im not inl ove with this poem i hope. it was not an easy read

MrGee commented on "Ragged Knees"

07-11-2009

Not sure I like this poem as it seems racial. but, then poetry is very subjective.

SEVEN commented on "Ragged Knees"

07-08-2009

Lawd I had to read and re-read dis....lol...dis tawkin must ben da burth ov ebonic....but I lub it....dis how dey tawked bak in dem days....good write......kudos

BooTz commented on "Ragged Knees"

07-06-2009

being from da dirty south..this isn't how all southerners act (or talk for that matter). this is a misconception of how southerners are represented(by ppl such as larry the cable guy). to be honest..i'm tryin to figure out wha da hell u were sayin lol.

WinterFrost commented on "Ragged Knees"

07-06-2009

Ok I have to admit this is trey bizzare. Not uninteresting and it does rhyme ... But I'm left scratchin my noggin I'll admit

WinterFrost

07/06/2009

I didn't rate it cause I didn't know how. It was interesting though.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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