Awesome'

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What scripture calls the 'good news' can be told in many ways but it has only one basic rule to be followed. Its hard to, at first understand the meaning of being 'born again'  but it is a necessity to be a part of Gods kingdom.  This is what was placed on my heart as an explaination taken from the holy bible.  Many today are worshiping man instead, but will reap what they sow, come the harvest.

Awesome'

Only a very few words can achieve a greatness that I know
Revealed, and made quite clear to me, many years ago.
I am aware of the supernatural and there are the powers that be,
We are given knowledge, wisdom and grace; the rest is mystery.
We are placed here for a reason and every happening has a cause
Some tend to be bad, the other for good, no in-between, or pause.
We are given a book of guidance on the way thgat we should go
Like a map thats used in traveling, through a life so filled with woe'
We are not created puppets moved, by transparent strings above
But each is given a mind of their own by which we all are loved.
Trials and tribulations are but tests that we must chose, to free our
Selves from a future judgement, in the hope that we won't lose.
Our final destination is not being judged, for either good nor bad,
But believing in a name; 'Yashuah', forms a lifestyle, that we have.
Whether it's spent in realms of glory, or in the fiery lake of hell.
At the final white throne of judgement, the books will purely tell.
Just consider the price of a Fathers love, the value to an only son
Of life's blood on a cruel cross paid, so our freedom could be won.
A fact that we are not our own,  but were paid for, with a price;
We can not go wrong, if we but belong, with Him in paradise.
Tho, some may scoff, deny a truth proclaimed by angels, from afar;
This righteous Lord awaits your call, he is aware of where you are.
Repent of things that soil your life and join the heavenly throng
Don't be decieved as some believe, that, All Roads lead to Rome!
There is only one way, no matter what they say, it doesn't cost a dime
The choice is simply up to you, eternity's a long, long time!


                                                              -satch,  les peoples

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Mandi commented on Awesome'

07-28-2009

I like your work.. I believe in the supernatural as well. I like the style and feel the way you portray your feellings in this piece. We must have a similar upbringing.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

satch’s Poems (21)

Title Comments
Title Comments
The Treehouse 3
Nightmares 1
Promises [ones you can believe] 1
Scratch my Itch 0
The blind Date 5
Awesome' 1
The Lake Walk 2
Loves Choice 3
The Coal Steam Locomotive 1
Mans' Metamorphosis 5
Story'oems 0
Nakedness 2
"Ragged Knees" 5
A Sad Reality 5
Harken 0
Our World Today 2
Miracles 7
"Lonely" 3
Flo 4
"Hey there" 6
"My Poem" 4