"My Poem"

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    "My Poem"

     I found this site by accident, it was offered by a friend
    T'wood be nice to be a poet: sumthin I have never been
    If I had a big vocabulary and really had some time
    some of my words like nouns and verbs
    may even chance to rhyme

    But first I am so puzzled as a topic I must choose
    since I haven't done this ever--I really have the blues
    If I had a little help and even have a friend
    It would really be much easier to know where to begin

    When first I came into this room and sat my body down
    I had a smile upon my face and not this dreadful frown
    My tallents not quite up to par so I do have this fear
    So I think I'll put this poem off and go have myself a beer'

                                         -les peoples

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    Chaos128 commented on "My Poem"

    07-18-2009

    Satch - I got a new pop-culture hero - you! This is about as cool an introduction as anyone could hope to have. If you don't mind, I'll have a beer with you; I might be 4,000 miles away but the next one I hoist, I'll raise the glass to you, and hope to be just like you when I grow up, ha ha.
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    SEVEN commented on "My Poem"

    07-02-2009

    Ur my kind of guy Satch....U don't have to poet.....Just be yourself and the pen will flow....Well if this your first one then ur on the right track....The ryhmey poems are the best......good write....kudo points for u on this piece...
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    Tatsukaza commented on "My Poem"

    06-16-2009

    your poems are good satch cheerful and flowing you'll be a fine poet bring your feelings and experiences to the paper and let your mind do the rest
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    Artie commented on "My Poem"

    06-08-2009

    Well you have the right attitude - lol. I think you'll do just fine here, and I'll be more than happy to add you on my friends list.
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    satch

    06/11/2009

    Thanks Artie guess ya gotta start somewhere. I had my first poem rejected as it was too long so this was an experment more or less. tks for reading -les

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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