The blind Date

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    Way back when overweight was a no no, and drive in movies were a popular yes yes, a tale of woe developed as a young lad was taken advantage of, kinda'  wink

    The blind Date

    A so-called friend, came bustin in to the local coffee shop
    where I was havin breakfast, and drinkin coffee, that was hot.
    He recalled, that I owed a favor, one that I had never paid
    So he sat down, he-hawin' around;  began talkin about this maid

    Who, he told, would find a gentleman, just right for her to see.
    He had searched around, none had been found; so it might as well be me!
    I gulped and could not swallow, my bacon would not go down;
    Does he really mean to tell me, I'm the only guy in town?

    Arrangements was, already made, as he gave me an address,
    An told me she'd be wearin, an orange polka dotted dress.
    I only had, five hours left and at once began to dread;
    What I had let, myself in for, then thoughts came to my head.

    She wouldn't be a beauty queen, to this, there was no doubt,
    Or she wouldn't be a datin blind, or with just anyone, go out.
    Finally, the time arrived, I pulled up to her place, and before I
    Had barely stopped, she was alookin in my face.

    Grinnin like a 'chelsea cat' with thick lips, a cherry red,
    I was stymied, and so confused, I couldn't tell what she'd said.
    I was wondering if it was an accent or if she had a lisp, but
    I sure didn't want to smear, that lipstick, on those lips!

    She wallered in, and gasped for breath, the seatbelt was too short,
    My poor car was a leanin, from the starboard to the port'
    The frame creaked from the strain as she finally settled down.
    I think she said she worked, with the city, in the nearby town.

    She could have been a "sidewalk tester" from weight she carried roun
    I could see them crack or buckle, as they sank into the ground.
    I, was gonna ask her choice, of where she'd prefer to go,
    To a country drive in movie or an inside picture show?

    She said to buy a sack of burgers and find a place to park
    She was so hungry, she could eat her weight, at least till it got dark.
    I just finally had to tell her it was late and I must go, that my
    Stomach was really achin and I couldn't take a show.

    I really do hate to have to fib, but sometimes it's the best
    If my friend ever mentions "blind date" I will smack him in the chest!
    He oughta help me pay the dammage to my car and to the springs,
    Or she could name the baby after him, would be the proper thing!

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    Lolee commented on The blind Date

    08-10-2009

    I guess I'm slow. That last line...did the fall guy actually get her pregnant on the blind date? I liked the poem. Let me know though. Thanks.

    satch

    08/10/2009

    hiya Lolee, thanks for commenting on my poems. I have had great experiences in my lifetime and it gives me fodder to write about. I must bew honest ablot the blind date pregnancy, as those things never happened in my day so just use your own imagination on the guilty party, lol,[it wasn't Me'] tks for you nice comments, -les

    jamila commented on The blind Date

    07-25-2009

    hi satch nice poem...i had been thru blind date when i awas in college way back 2004 hehhehe..thank's letting me to remind those days..hehhehe GBU

    Tempestlady commented on The blind Date

    07-22-2009

    I was thinkin "one that I'd forgot" after the coffee was hot. Very funny, and cute, blind dates are always a hoot. Enjoyed this one, yur doin fine, i'll read your if you read mine. Write on.....

    satch

    07/22/2009

    Tks tempestlady, I was in a silly moodwhen pened this but glad you liked it--I will gladly be reading yoursand commenting' ty, again

    SEVEN commented on The blind Date

    07-22-2009

    Hahahaha......this is all too funny....hey wait a minute, I got set up on a blind date b4...The only diff is my blind date was two beers shy of a six pack and ya know a man needs his six pack.... lol....your buddy could have at least chipped in to rent a flatbed truck to take your date out ......hehe....This reminds me of the movie (Shallow Hal)....hehe....good write.....kudos

    satch

    07/22/2009

    Thanks a million Seven for your checkin mine out and hope they can be close to be enjoyable as you are the Best! I feel great to have you comment my friend so I bow to your approval to my silly rhymes.

    NJay commented on The blind Date

    07-21-2009

    You are so experienced satch. I love this poem. It is long flowing poetic epistle. I love it

    satch

    07/22/2009

    Thank you NJay for your kind words. I can write a poem in an hour or so but takes twice that long to correct spelling/ punctuation and sometimes even have to add a line here and there, but its fun and worth the effort to get your nice comment.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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