"Lonely"

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"Lonely"

Life is so depressing when you get things on your mind
And you have no one to talk to; and there's none that you can find
For exercise I just might walk and journey into town.
And there perchance, I just might meet, a stranger standing around.
I've never been outgoing; guess my life has been so bland
I reckon I'm easy going;  guess I never make a stand.
I almost had a date one time, but that was long ago,
It just might be the way I talk;  I do talk very slow.
I could never dream of marriage; get a life and settle down
It would be spent, in discontent, with no one else around.
As I approach a bus stop, there sat several on a bench;
I tried a conversation, but they wouldn't budge an inch.
No matter what I said to them, it just had no appeal;
Like I didn't speak their language, this is how it made me feel.
So I just slowly walked away, determined as I was;
to find an ear, willing to hear, and listen to my buzz.
But then to my amazement this person came along,
They were smiling as they hummed--I forget the song.
As I began to tell them of an experience that I had,
The smile abruptly left their face, and they looked very sad.
I thought I better change the mood;  I talked about their song,
but when I turned around to say--I saw that they were gone.
What can I say but golly gee', is life now turned so wrong
That you can't talk with a stranger and comment on a song?

                                              les peoples

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SpiritSong commented on "Lonely"

10-04-2009

The Bible teaces that.."A Friend true loves at all times," (sometimes that means with a parental loves for sure) and also, "That there is a friend that sticks closer than a brother," we can put our faith in NO man...but it is a wonderful thing to know a true and honest friend, and once in a while even a kindred spirit, a satch? Talk any time..."SpiritSong"

SpiritSong

10/04/2009

well I might press harder on my computer keyboard to spell right a satch? lol:) have a beautiful evening... "SpiritSong"

Lolee commented on "Lonely"

08-10-2009

My sentiments exactly! What's wrong with people today? I remember when it was common to just start talking to people you didn't know. Now, they look at you as if thy think you are a lunatic. These are different times my friend....but then it could just be that you need an extra dose of right-guard. lol Nawww, just kiddin. Keep writing, you are good.

SEVEN commented on "Lonely"

07-05-2009

I can't picture ur being lonely when u have the gift of words... I sent u an invite and hope to read more of your work...Dont let the ink run out.....keep'm comin

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

satch’s Poems (21)

Title Comments
Title Comments
The Treehouse 3
Nightmares 1
Promises [ones you can believe] 1
Scratch my Itch 0
The blind Date 5
Awesome' 1
The Lake Walk 2
Loves Choice 3
The Coal Steam Locomotive 1
Mans' Metamorphosis 5
Story'oems 0
Nakedness 2
"Ragged Knees" 5
A Sad Reality 5
Harken 0
Our World Today 2
Miracles 7
"Lonely" 3
Flo 4
"Hey there" 6
"My Poem" 4