First things in mind

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    Literally, I wrote whatever came to mind this time. Lots of strange thought appeared and I wrote them. Some of these won't make sense, but it doesn't have to, its the human mind. Also, I can't get this girl off my mind! It's driving me insane, a bit of that is in there.

    First things in mind

     Go green
    Its the right thing
    Wrap a holiday gift
    Its christmas
    I don't want to edit
    My profile right now
    Maybe later
    Rugrats was a good show
    I like Reptar
    Dude, that's not cool
    Your dad shouldn't do that
    I can't see my clock
    There's stuff in the way
    I wish I could play guitar
    But it's too late
    There was this thing
    With eyes on its hands
    That was freaky
    I spelled a word wrong
    Someday I'll be
    A PhD
    Considering commentary
    A beautiful redhead
    Not natural though
    But still
    It's so dark in my room
    And I'm up so late
    I can't give good advice
    I don't notice when she flirts
    Or if she cares
    That's just me
    I don't notice things
    I had to ask everyone
    What my talents were
    I didn't know
    I have a mouse on my wall
    Plush with a magnet in its back
    Horn Creek
    Very fine establishment
    Fun times there
    Another plush mouse
    I'm so cold
    Piled up in blankets
    Shaking all over
    I still can't see my clock
    A sneeze echoes
    Through the house
    A light shines from the floor
    My phone
    Of course
    I'm typing very loudly
    They'll probably wake up
    We don't want that
    Last thought
    Tattoo
    Left shoulder

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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