That Calm Night

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The little things truly get me the most. A handshake, a hug, a word of encouragement. I get driven crazy by the things girls do. Well, not just any girls. Mostly just the princesses.

That Calm Night

Dying young
What
Ideas
Truth in an eye
Mine to thine
Take me
Take you
Let it fall
Just an organ
Pumping blood
Worthless
Piece of body
Personified in love

The start
The end
Understand
Here and there
Take me where
The grass is blue
The sky shines bright
The girls run easy
The men are right

Let me go
Let me Show
Get me there
I'll hold you
Plans for squares
Enjoy the view
Take the food
Fairies in the world

How true to thee
My hands from me
Stroke down
That soft warm back
Beautiful girl
Silent of nights
Speak and speak with me

I'll never let this go
I've made you my only exception
I'm not playing God
I have put up my fences
Screaming hallelujah
Take my heart 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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