The struggle of a teenage boy

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    Poem Commentary

    I'm really confused on things right now, and I don't want to end up hurting anyone. So I wrote out my thoughts to let off some steam.

    The struggle of a teenage boy

     Laying in this fitted bed
    Staring into the painted stars
    Wishing for a window
    One to see into the world
    See the heavens
    The lovely stars

    I don't know how to do this
    So many of them
    Not the stars
    Just certain people
    A certain kind of people

    Just girls
    But I don't know what to do
    I don't want to
    Hurt them
    The ends
    Don't always justify the
    Means

    And I'm afraid
    Of being mean
    Cruel, in a sense
    Leaving one for the other
    Considering
    Them, not my brothers

    I hate this!
    I cannot stand this
    So young
    Yet I'm so lost
    I'm not rebellious
    That's what they said

    I am in between things right now
    I don't know how I should
    Do things
    I don't want to
    Hurt
    Anyone

    Or
    Hurt
    Myself
    Again

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    ahardwalk commented on The struggle of a teenage boy

    12-01-2010

    Taking risk is apart of life.... Breathing and taking the easy way you will always feel incomplete... sometimes we must try the hard road.. great emotional felt poem!!!
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