Examined closely

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    I'm having a fit of insomnia again, but I'm still tired. My thought here, as they came to mind.

    Examined closely

     Twisted and sick
    The plots and my fits
    Never sleeping nor awake
    A simple tune to ease my aches
    Understand the end is nigh
    My dreams shall only fly
    Imagination in a mess
    Examined by acts of blessed 
    Not me, not I
    Nor the catcher in the rye
    The others they say
    Superfluous in ways
    Torment and anguish
    The rich so lavished

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Examined closely

    01-04-2011

    I like you poetry, it is original and unique. I like some poems because they are what is, but yours is different and that is cool.
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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