What I'd like her to be,, right now

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    What I'd like her to be,, right now

     Smooth and straight
    Pale skinned
    Perhaps a little sun
    Perhaps
    Soft silken hair
    Vibrant color
    Ever changing
    I'd like that
    Glasses
    I like to see their eyes
    Warm skin
    Touched against mine
    Gentle legs
    Long and trusting
    Height
    Is a matter of opinion
    I don't care
    Talks to me
    Be a friend
    Comfort me
    Let me hold them
    Stroke them
    Show my love
    Let's me
    Vent
    I'm very
    Emotional
    Too much
    Inside me
    I want someone
    To listen
    Not argue
    Not give me old advice
    Not put me down
    Not try to change me
    But to listen
    And only that
    To love me for who I am
    What I want to be
    And who I'm becoming
    Know that the Lord
    He is God
    It is He
    That hath made us
    And not we ourselves
    A woman of God
    Who understands and follows
    The Creator
    Respects me
    And my family
    And my Father
    Helps me to grow
    Makes me into a better person
    Flows with how I'm changing
    Goes with me through my
    Ups and downs

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    hannahxP commented on What I'd like her to be,, right now

    01-15-2011

    i like how you put in the bit about venting it kinda connects this poem to your dripping speeches poem :) i like it
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    ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on What I'd like her to be,, right now

    12-06-2010

    Knowing what you want is important. You are very clear in this piece about what you want. I appreciate your honesty and clarity. The way you write really speaks to me. Thanks for sharing.........E
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    Sx9 commented on What I'd like her to be,, right now

    12-05-2010

    WE ALL HAVE OUR THOUGHTS MIXED UP SOME TIMES,AND SO IT IS STILL NOT THE REAL THING,JUST THE WAY WE WISH IT COULD BE,AND SO YES i SHARE YOUR VIBES,NICELY PEN,,
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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