trick of the trade

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    trick of the trade

    'tis the labor of love taming the wild
     discovering each other's dove is just another child
     for you see consistency,well
     it never has been a human trait
     once here then gone never again to be (oh no!)
     fear not for this too is forgotten easily
     is this consistency? maybe?
     for one man's surrealism is another man's reality
     the trick of the trade is to aim above morality
     and love at it's peak unable to grow stronger
     this would take only a life time
     perhaps just a little longer
     for even a life time is too short to share
     with that person of whom you do care
     and if able to alter time,yes i would dare
     those days we both rhymed
     babe that moment i'd place for all to share

                       tyke

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    PamelaALamppa commented on trick of the trade

    10-07-2009

    " the trick of the trade is to aim above morality" Excellent words in this line and the anchor of this piece. Very well done. You are skilled with words and a talented writer. ~Pamela

    knight4696 commented on trick of the trade

    08-29-2009

    "for one man's surrealism is another man's reality the trick of the trade is to aim above morality and love at it's peak unable to grow stronger this would take only a life time perhaps just a little longer" I loved this verse! Is this consistency? maybe..... :)

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    tykehall’s Poems (43)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    My Simpler Thoughts On You 3
    Feeling Acquainted,Ar
    e We?
    1
    I Love You 2
    love? 1
    silver bird dove 1
    if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
    love for some, play for others 1
    final dimension 2
    and the answer is...........
    .....
    1
    the scout made to pout 1
    little roy screw 1
    he did me father 2
    rising to the occasion 2
    ( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
    a familiar stranger 1
    and still i can believe in him 1
    just a quickie 2
    my dearest 2
    a stand 1
    self realization 1
    coping with composure 2
    parting past 2
    sparks 3
    the space your absence fills 2
    looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
    inside the ride 1
    life's savings 1
    pursuing my dreams 2
    the yin and the yang 1
    pook's lullaby 1
    just a thought at hand 1
    happily married 4
    orchid midnight 1
    just friends; and then? 1
    one branch (observation) 1
    you, sharing me;who cares? 1
    sing, memorabilia, sing 1
    floating hearts 1
    waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
    a revealed vision of love 1
    trick of the trade 2
    a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
    p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2