just friends; and then?

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    just friends; and then?

    a power long unchallenged,not another greater than.
    the power of the feeling,to be honored with a special friend.
    to stregnthen with response,at least everyday i do intend.
    vulnerable,only if materialisticly spent.
    but not for us to worry,sincere to eternity's end.
    from the start of the universe,an unknown shuttle
    harboring unshown feelings,not to mention
    an opposing rebuttle.
    expressing such emotions as jealousy,hatred and chaos,
    silly little feelings rapidily growing outrageous.
    yet still not enough to overcome the friendship so famous.
    now always and forever this power will extend.
    even without the stregnth of the two
    who through it all became more than
    just friends.

                       tyke

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    knight4696 commented on just friends; and then?

    09-04-2009

    Tyke - I read this one twice. I wanted to make sure I felt what you were saying. I loved it. Keep up the good work. I saved this one to my favorites as well! :)

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    I Love You 2
    love? 1
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    if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
    love for some, play for others 1
    final dimension 2
    and the answer is...........
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    the scout made to pout 1
    little roy screw 1
    he did me father 2
    rising to the occasion 2
    ( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
    a familiar stranger 1
    and still i can believe in him 1
    just a quickie 2
    my dearest 2
    a stand 1
    self realization 1
    coping with composure 2
    parting past 2
    sparks 3
    the space your absence fills 2
    looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
    inside the ride 1
    life's savings 1
    pursuing my dreams 2
    the yin and the yang 1
    pook's lullaby 1
    just a thought at hand 1
    happily married 4
    orchid midnight 1
    just friends; and then? 1
    one branch (observation) 1
    you, sharing me;who cares? 1
    sing, memorabilia, sing 1
    floating hearts 1
    waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
    a revealed vision of love 1
    trick of the trade 2
    a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
    p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2