my dearest

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my dearest

a man driven to insanity with passionate anger.
denied love's comfort, as if an infatuated stranger.
sent with no reason an inquisition of forgiveness.
confused even humbly, is still worth much less.
sent with great valor, a tear meant for failure,
off to his shore sail pure.
one must learn to offer love, never force.
oh feeling, please set your course?
fickle for affection, more than love can generate.
too much this devotion when having to seperate.
and is there no mercy?, avoiding the emotion, hate.
be this the tortures of unfaithful ignorant actions?
heartless measured in the smallest of fractions.
if for the relationship creating negative energies,
i'd sacrifice my peaceful death, to spare you the agonies.
the security powered limelight through love lost went dim.
this time well meant for learning to swim.
or the simplest attempt at fashioning a boat,
in vain this time spent,
teaching a rock to float?
highly praised for achievements backed with
tremendous moral support.
from our little love mission we vowed never to abort.
but the wheel turns on eventually coming to our nemesis.
so before i become an insane little mess,
hurry up and say good-bye,
my dearest.

              tyke

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knight4696 commented on my dearest

09-17-2009

I meant to rate this and hit "no thanks" in error. this is definately a 9.5 for me.

knight4696 commented on my dearest

09-17-2009

Tyke - I really enjoed this one. It is filled with mixed emotions and really had me thinking. As usual - a very thought provoking poem. Great work! Ken

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

tykehall’s Poems (43)

Title Comments
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My Simpler Thoughts On You 3
Feeling Acquainted,Ar
e We?
1
I Love You 2
love? 1
silver bird dove 1
if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
love for some, play for others 1
final dimension 2
and the answer is...........
.....
1
the scout made to pout 1
little roy screw 1
he did me father 2
rising to the occasion 2
( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
a familiar stranger 1
and still i can believe in him 1
just a quickie 2
my dearest 2
a stand 1
self realization 1
coping with composure 2
parting past 2
sparks 3
the space your absence fills 2
looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
inside the ride 1
life's savings 1
pursuing my dreams 2
the yin and the yang 1
pook's lullaby 1
just a thought at hand 1
happily married 4
orchid midnight 1
just friends; and then? 1
one branch (observation) 1
you, sharing me;who cares? 1
sing, memorabilia, sing 1
floating hearts 1
waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
a revealed vision of love 1
trick of the trade 2
a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2