a stand

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    a stand

     trapped within a void,
    between manhood and a boy,
    who could.
    overcrowded in the middle of
    emptiness, surrounded by
    nothingness, lonely the two stood.
    now i've seen a bit of the world
    through the blue eyes of a blond boy, tyke.
    and now, i'm only a man.
    so i look through you to the universe,
    for a place to voice my stand.

      tyke

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    knight4696 commented on a stand

    09-15-2009

    Tyke - You definately have a way with expressing some deep, intense subjects in so little words. I don't know how you do it. But I really admire it. Keep it up..... another great job. :) Ken
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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