I Love You

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I Love You

      I Love You

Flowers bloom,born of dreams come true.
I treasure these words I heard from you.
Fruit of mine to taste at will,
I love you.
I rest in the silence of wide opened pupils,
blue black so round so intent.
The softness you are inside your armor,
is the very essence of what I love deepest.
And you won't ever have to worry about
what I'll do with this.
For you see, I do know the value of you
walking through walls in your heart.
I have scared you in my needs and
I hope to disprove your fears.
I feel the love shining through.
I see beauty so pure it is heard to bare.
It is the finest taste in earth.

    tyke

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Charlie23 commented on I Love You

01-24-2010

This is amazing, the amount of love that fills ones heart when reading! The poem is absolutely beautiful!

knight4696 commented on I Love You

01-24-2010

Tyke This is my favorite of yous. The emotions are so tangible and elequently stated. The feelings are so real. Poetically sound and an awesome read! :) Ken - saved to faves and 10+++

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

tykehall’s Poems (43)

Title Comments
Title Comments
My Simpler Thoughts On You 3
Feeling Acquainted,Ar
e We?
1
I Love You 2
love? 1
silver bird dove 1
if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
love for some, play for others 1
final dimension 2
and the answer is...........
.....
1
the scout made to pout 1
little roy screw 1
he did me father 2
rising to the occasion 2
( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
a familiar stranger 1
and still i can believe in him 1
just a quickie 2
my dearest 2
a stand 1
self realization 1
coping with composure 2
parting past 2
sparks 3
the space your absence fills 2
looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
inside the ride 1
life's savings 1
pursuing my dreams 2
the yin and the yang 1
pook's lullaby 1
just a thought at hand 1
happily married 4
orchid midnight 1
just friends; and then? 1
one branch (observation) 1
you, sharing me;who cares? 1
sing, memorabilia, sing 1
floating hearts 1
waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
a revealed vision of love 1
trick of the trade 2
a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2