pursuing my dreams

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    pursuing my dreams

     i've lost my dreams, never again to find.
    intertwinement
           within the vines
           within the vines of simple minds,
                                 of simple minds bent.
           why?, can not i find just one kind
                                     simple piece of mind.
                                               peace of mind? this my time
                                                                     this my time spent.
    i've lost my dreams,  tossed to thy streams.
                                                thy streams?, how they flow
                                                                    how they flow so slow.
                                                        but from where could they grow?
                                               it seems my tears would show.
                             i have fears of loneliness and now you know.
    i've lost my dreams, where did they go?

                   tyke

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    SavVySam commented on pursuing my dreams

    10-02-2009

    Your interesting form was instrumental to the overall feel of this piece. Nice flow and meter. Thanks for sharing.
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    knight4696 commented on pursuing my dreams

    09-09-2009

    Tyke - I like the way you spaced this one. It works very well with the verse. I also like the questions. it made me stop to think. Good job with this one too. By the way - slow down with the postings, I can't keep up :)
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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