My Simpler Thoughts On You

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My Simpler Thoughts On You

Well,I know what it's like to be in love with you.
I would pull the sun and the moon down at your feet,
to play marbles with,if you asked me to.
I could trade favorite colors,mine for yours,if you wanted to.
As I can not seem to stop crying over you,I'll continue to do so.
Only I'll do so in the prettiest water colored thoughts,
cut out of the most precious tears in life.
I am surrounded by the ever changing affects of your love.
And am lost within its reflections of silence.
Then once again found by their soft purring sounds of desire.
When I'm with you,I feel as though I am beyond the consequences
of good and bad,right and wrong.
And I shall try to conceal my disappointment when I
turn to give you a smile and realize for the first time
that you do not share these same joys.
Do you ever find yourself wandering carelessly amongst thoughts of me?
These are my fears,familiar scars bared.
And somewhere outside my thoghts?
Not because I'm now totally lost,but rather
I weep for the repose of our once acquainted souls.
I long for the release from their memory.

        tyke

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BrokenAndrew commented on My Simpler Thoughts On You

09-11-2011

this is absolutely amazing. so powerful. it's rather inspiring, with it's beauty.

tykehall

09/12/2011

thanks i've read onev of your poems so far and liked it i intend to read more of your poems.how do i add you to my friends list?that is ie you agree to such a request

knight4696 commented on My Simpler Thoughts On You

02-07-2010

Tyke - This is truly beautiful but very sad at the same time ...Wonderfully written in the Tyke style that I have become so fond of. Great write my friend! :) Ken

Charlie23 commented on My Simpler Thoughts On You

01-24-2010

This poem has a real sadness to it, compared with the poem I just read of yours! You have artestry to your writing the way you can paint a picture with your words!

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

tykehall’s Poems (43)

Title Comments
Title Comments
My Simpler Thoughts On You 3
Feeling Acquainted,Ar
e We?
1
I Love You 2
love? 1
silver bird dove 1
if there were love?, (now that's a different story), altogether 3
love for some, play for others 1
final dimension 2
and the answer is...........
.....
1
the scout made to pout 1
little roy screw 1
he did me father 2
rising to the occasion 2
( day dreaming ), with eyes wide opened 1
a familiar stranger 1
and still i can believe in him 1
just a quickie 2
my dearest 2
a stand 1
self realization 1
coping with composure 2
parting past 2
sparks 3
the space your absence fills 2
looking out at the world from the belly of a wolf 2
inside the ride 1
life's savings 1
pursuing my dreams 2
the yin and the yang 1
pook's lullaby 1
just a thought at hand 1
happily married 4
orchid midnight 1
just friends; and then? 1
one branch (observation) 1
you, sharing me;who cares? 1
sing, memorabilia, sing 1
floating hearts 1
waiting (is something i can do) for him 3
a revealed vision of love 1
trick of the trade 2
a superb absurdity (did occur to me) 1
p.i.m. entry 11/28/04 2