final dimension

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    final dimension

    when you're feeling alone
    your only company a stone,
    demons appear from the walls.
    your name they call.
    their chant, "you we take for a fall."
    lying awake alone,
    now gone is the stone.
    yet the demons still moan.
    "now we call your final fall,
    your sentence to serve we find you deserve.
    spend you eternity all alone.
    further we state, without the stone."
    but solitary, care thee listen to me,
    can be an experience to set thy soul free.
    you wouldn't hear the words i've spoke,
    so i enter the realm of spiritual folk.

     tyke

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    Charlie23 commented on final dimension

    10-08-2009

    This is a very lonely poem, all they want is to take the stone, cause without "Him" your completely alone! Well written poem!

    knight4696 commented on final dimension

    10-07-2009

    Tyke - This truly is a dark and sad poem. It reflects a soul cast to hell - his damnation - to spend eternity condemned in solitary confinement. A journey that I myself have felt, and wish not to repeat. Great Job!

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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