Temperamental Dreams

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    Temperamental Dreams

    My eyes are getting sleepy,
    the nightmare's are chasing me,
    iI have to keep on running,
    I cant seem to get free.

    I made a deal with the Devil,
    and there is no turning back,
    I walked the wrong way in life,
    followed the wrong track.

    I'm waking up at night,
    with these horrifying screams,
    I'm waking up at night,
    from my temperamental dreams.

    I am all alone,
    in what seems to be hell,
    I wouldn't have been here,
    if my soul i didn't sell.

    Blinded in the darkness,
    can't see the light,
    I cant find my way out,
    and cant see who to fight.

    I lay in bed at night,
    trying to find a way,
    hoping and praying,
    that they will end someday.

    But still I'm waking up,
    with these horrifying screams,
    I cant get away,
    from my temperamental dreams.

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    Kdaddy commented on Temperamental Dreams

    09-17-2009

    I like this one, my opinion is this is one of your best. The flow, the imagery very cool and thought provoking.

    CLB

    09/17/2009

    can you send me a friend request? i wanted to read some of your stuff but when i type in Kdaddy it brings me to someone else's profile. thanks for the comment this was gonna be a song but didnt know what to do with it

    cmlestrade commented on Temperamental Dreams

    09-17-2009

    ooohh creepy, but very vivid. Wouldn't want to share your dreams. This expertly rhymed poem is very frightening with a great deal of rhythm and irony. Very nice write

    CLB

    09/17/2009

    thank you for the comment this was gonna be a song. if you read my other stuff im sure your gonna love them

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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