Field of Roses

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    Field of Roses

    I found a field of roses,
    so you can have one everyday,
    and no one would ever think,
    to take any of them away.
    I watch the heaven's change colors,
    to match the beauty of you,
    it still doesnt compare,
    it has alot more work to do.
    Your eyes remind me of a sky,
    on a hot summer's day,
    together we could reach for stars,
    that are so far away.
    You could warm me up by holding my hand,
    on a cold winter's night,
    and me holding your hand,
    will scare off all the fright.
    You smell more stunning,
    than a field of roses,
    the feeling is so soft,
    as we stick them to our noses.
    No one really knows,
    how the field grew,
    the beauty and cleanliness,
    of being brand new.
    Holding roses by the stem,
    being careful for the thorn,
    God overdid himself,
    the day you were born.

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    cmlestrade commented on Field of Roses

    09-26-2009

    This is beautiful. You are a natural at rhyme and rhythm and I love your work, You carry the theme from beginning to end nothing mundane just sheer joy in reading.

    lunamarie commented on Field of Roses

    09-08-2009

    mmmm ... I'm smelling them ... I like this ... Luna

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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