Confused...

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  • Confusion

    Confused...

    With my eyes,
    I see through your disguise.
    Your leading me down the wrong trail,
    in the end neither will prevail.
    Only look for what your looking for,
    look for that and nothing more.
    Treasures of silver, bronze and even gold,
    beware, richness can make you bold.
    If you finish your quest,
    you will be greatly blessed.
    It's harder than you think,
    not as fast as when you blink.
    As quick as you can,
    hey, your back to where you began.
    It takes more than none and less than two,
    I guess that just leaves you.
    Take your time and soon you will be amused,
    take your time or else you will be confused.

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    cmlestrade commented on Confused...

    03-10-2010

    Great Philosophy that rhymes nicely and has a very steady beat. Definitely food for thought.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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