Embracing the Feeling

3 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Embracing the Feeling

     I love your gorgeous brown eyes,
    and the way your fingers run through your hair,
    I know by us being together,
    we can help each other fight the things we fear.
    Whenever i'm around you,
    I get a feeling of sweet sublime,
    and i can only pray to god,
    we will be together till the end of time.
    I love your smile,
    and the way you wave goodbye at night,
    this feeling we have for each other,
    just seems so right.
    I can't wait,
    to kiss your soft lips,
    and run through your hair,
    with my fingertips.
    I love the way your eyes twinkle,
    and all your heavenly grace,
    the way we feel for each other,
    we can only embrace.
    I've waited a really long time,
    to find someone to talk to,
    and it makes me happy to know,
    that person might be you.
    I can't wait to hold you,
    so close to me,
    I'll be the man of your dreams,
    just wait and see.
    You look so pretty,
    and smell so fine,
    I know that someday,
    you'll be all mine.
    Now that i'm around,
    I don't want to miss a beat,
    because God sent me here,
    to sweep you off your feet.

    Poem Comments

    (3)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    jenifer commented on Embracing the Feeling

    06-18-2013

    every woman wants this kind of love, even those who act like they don't there just afraid.
    Reply to Comment

    swapnajohn20 commented on Embracing the Feeling

    02-07-2010

    I just cant believe this chris !!! A woman who is longing for a true love would love to hear this.A very simple way of expressing the true feelings..Lucky is the one who receive this..
    Reply to Comment

    cmlestrade commented on Embracing the Feeling

    01-08-2010

    Very nice love poem. The recipient will be so flattered it will knock her off her feet. this well rhymed and metered piece had a steady rhythm and excellent word choice.
    Reply to Comment

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    CLB’s Poems (34)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Tainted Vision 2 09/18/2009
    God's Fate 2 09/17/2009
    Lost and Forgiven 3 09/17/2009
    Embracing the Feeling 3 09/17/2009
    Confused... 1 09/17/2009
    Denied 1 09/17/2009
    Temperamental Dreams 2 09/17/2009
    Life's Choices 0 09/16/2009
    Caught 1 09/16/2009
    Life's Footrace 0 09/16/2009
    Change your set of Mind 0 09/16/2009
    Endless Love 0 09/16/2009
    All I Want 1 09/16/2009
    Aim for the Stars 0 09/16/2009
    Untraveled Path 0 09/16/2009
    Your Father's Death 0 09/16/2009
    One Road 1 09/09/2009
    In Time 1 09/09/2009
    White Angel 2 09/09/2009
    In your Heart 2 09/09/2009
    From the Twilight 1 09/09/2009
    Healer from above 1 09/09/2009
    Other Options 0 09/09/2009
    Asking 0 09/09/2009
    Soul's Collide 0 09/08/2009
    Only Child 1 09/08/2009
    No Pain 0 09/08/2009
    Whispers 3 09/09/2009
    Heaven's Angel 2 09/06/2009
    Field of Roses 2 09/06/2009
    Ashley's Ashes 1 09/06/2009
    The Front Line 1 09/06/2009
    My ode to you 3 09/06/2009
    Listen for a moment 2 09/06/2009
    Top of Page