"Stitches for fun"

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    "Stitches for fun"

    It took a while to get them to stay..
    I would fix them and move them until they behaved,
    But now these little pieces of strands , all over the place
    they're heavy and sad, and they're stuck in the way.
    Stitches for fun, stitches for me, these sad little sutures are calling my name.
    They only hold me together never taking the blame, I'm afraid these frail little things will lose all their faith.
    Stitches for me and stitches for you, ..you cut me up and then I'll cut you.
    Having fun? Now we call it a night.. until the next outburst.. until the next fight.

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    lithiumblack commented on "Stitches for fun"

    10-05-2009

    A harsh and strangely beautiful depiction of lacerating words and the damage they leave behind. You write with observant flair and honesty, and that's a rare thing for many writers. Another great piece, and another 10.

    lonewolf commented on "Stitches for fun"

    03-21-2009

    interesting poem.

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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