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We often think we have found the answer to our deepest dreams.. perhaps our deepest wishes. Those wishes we held onto through childhood, that another destroyed with hate and lies.. but yet another has come along and showed us how deeply we can love. How I have dreamed about you forever and always. Although you said we have unreal expectations... I think we have those dreams that sit dormant in our heart ready to be found.. because they are possible. So few of us find what we are looking for. But if I were to die today I can say I have died finding what I always dreamed of... my soul, my heart, ......... My loveliest fate. ..................... My twin flame.

You are here.

To the one who will have it all and forever.


Many came my love, many tried. Many claimed to love, not knowing themselves what that was.

Many chose to walk away, as I stayed.  Alone in my heart and mind I played.

There is hope, there is faith and then there is fate.

It started on that fateful summer day.

Clouds overhead blue skies underneath, what a wonderful man was waiting for me.

My sadness to end, my heart to weep, for the happiness that there awaited me.


Clean slates are often tainted by hate, but you broke that bond between the tattered girl and her awful demise...

Now all that's left is her heart .... untouched? Uncompromised.?? How is this so? 

But, my love it is so... you are here... could life have been so strange?,.... to wait until the very end to show me my fate...? 

Eternity.. yours - Demise Revised.
 

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

alldreamz’s Poems (57)

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Thoughts. 0
A request. 0
Irony 3
The Love Blossom 1
You are here. 0
pulling away 0
SALVATION 1
The statement 0
The last letter. 0
All is not lost 0
The call of the desperate lover 0
wonder. 0
minutes in time. 0
Born out of scars 2
unfaithful lover. 2
Letter to my ..lover? 0
Miracle dream 1
Fire in the sky 0
There is always hope in you. 1
The rambling of a loser. 0
The end. (Doomsday proclamation) 2
Giving in to the void 0
Never again, never the same. 0
Predicament 0
Conflict of the tri part being. 0
The question. 0
.. thoughts and such 1
Who is then? 0
Messenger moon 2
NEED 4
Beautiful power. 2
The random thoughts of an unseen lover. 1
stuck 2
Numb is bliss. 1
Stranger. 0
An angel's love a stranger's promise. 0
The most dangerous safe place 1
Limbo 0
Golden cage. 0
Last night. 1
twisted worlds 2
My constant 0
.....wake up 2
The fairy tale fever 1
A past life 0
The Rambling Lover 0
Snowwhite's mirror. 3
Everything everywhere then.. I am sad. 0
Dialouge with God. 3
The six senses of truth. 2
The sarcastic Ocean and the Light 0
the run. 2
Scatter 1
Chosen, Shadow, and the void. 1
The Lion and the viking. 1
Not okay. 1
"Stitches for fun" 2