Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

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    The was a poem written in 07, I know it's old, but till I can come up with more, I am post all of my old ones.....

    Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

    She is sweet,
    She is neat,
    She likes to have fun,
    I love that she is my one,
    ONLY,
    She is all I want,
    In a woman,
    I could ask,
    For nothing more,
    She is the one I adore,

    Everyone thinks,
    I like the world to revolve,
    Around me,
    They don't know,
    My world,
    Revolves around her,

    She has three,
    Wonderful kids,
    Only two,
    I know,
    Also adore,
    The third,
    She has told me about him,
    He sounds fun,
    Like his mom,
    I love her,
    That's the only thing I can say,
    Nothing more....

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    BooTz commented on Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy....

    08-26-2009

    this is bittersweet piece. makes u wonder what else she has to offer. makes u wonder about the 3rd child. this piece leaves me wondering in general lol

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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