Her

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    Her
    As she walks by,
    She is the only thing in my eye,
    I think of her day and night,
    It hurts me not being able to know,
    Where things would end,
    Where life would go,
    I have been told that I am just sappy,
    All that I want is to be happy,
    To be loved,
    Nothing more,
    That's for sure,

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    freind commented on Her

    08-25-2009

    again very nice write .sounds of a glimmer in your eye . that catches your eye
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    melki18 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    I really like this.. It very moving. I love it.. And its about love. It's short and sweet !
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    melanie23 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    i know that feeling and ive been through what u discribe. short and sweet is better to get a message across better than something drawn out.
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    Plot121 commented on Her

    08-20-2009

    They say short and sweet is good and the flow as well as the message was well done. I enjoyed reading this piece good work Robert,,,
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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