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    9-14-09 This is of my current girlfriend/best friend...

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    Life is filled with a new light
    It is the difference between day and night
    During the day
    She is right beside me to stay
    During the night
    With her around
    It is just as if day light
    With her, there are no questions or fears
    I know she will always be here
    She spoils me rotten
    That is something I have gotten
    Only once before
    It came at a price, that is for sure
    The price with her
    My love and happiness
    Nothing more
    There is only one word I can say
    AMAZING
    As I lay here a gazing
    Pondering
    Wondering
    How can I deserve this dream
    As it may seem
    Please don't wake me
    Leave this, as it may be
    As I lay watching her sleep
    Not making a peep
    Not wishing to let one moment slip by
    Wiping another tear from my eye
    She is my best friend
    That is all that was originally planned
    I honestly hope for more
    That's for sure
    As usual, my hopes get shot down
    Laying there, lifeless amongst the ground
    Not with her
    She picks them up
    Dusts them off
    Doctors them up
    Now with her here
    They are to soar
    Higher than ever before
    She is a one of a kind
    She is the only thought in mind
    She is top of the line

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    Kaleidoscope commented on Unknown

    02-16-2010

    Who says "you are not one of the better poets" This poem says different..You have a full life and still find time to share your gift..Thank you Kaleidsocope

    RJK commented on Unknown

    12-09-2009

    a person that come's in to your life like takes a part of you that you don't mind giveing up. Nice way to look a that kind of friend

    Artie commented on Unknown

    10-18-2009

    Nice write!! This is an excellent display of strong and true emotions of happiness - nice job

    bettybop200741 commented on Unknown

    10-03-2009

    I really like this poem. It saids alot about being in love with a special person. The way the world is today about divorce rate. It is something special to foundly find the one to love and loveyou back the same way. Again this poem says alot and very well written.

    kochab commented on Unknown

    09-22-2009

    glad to see that she turned out to be such a catch for ya ray.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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