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    I wrote this poem when I was in high school...

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    Help me Lord,
    I am bored,
    I can't talk,
    All I can do is walk,
    Help me Lord,
    I can't look,
    In my book,
    I love,
    As much as a dove,
    I hate as little as a stake,
    Help me Lord!!!

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    melanie23 commented on Help

    08-20-2009

    i have i bit of a hard time following this one but it does have good flow
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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