Hurt and Pain

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Hurt and Pain

Life moves on,
People come and go,
Where life is going to take us,
We shall never know,
Some things make you strong,
Some make you hollow,
All we can do is keep moving along,
Learning to build walls,
Used to shield and block you from it all,
Feeling very odd,
The day someone causes them to fall,
With just a slight nod,
Helplessly open to hurt and pain,
All over once again,
Hurting even more,
Watching that person walk right out the front door,
Never to return,
Ever again,

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AChance commented on Hurt and Pain

12-16-2009

So many things to say, First I commend you on putting emotion in your work. You have talent. But I see life a little differently.

MarionYost commented on Hurt and Pain

10-20-2009

I like this one a lot. I relate to it. (Think everyone could say that.) this is a good one. Keep it up All the best -Marion-

BooTz commented on Hurt and Pain

08-26-2009

i've been there. it hurts like hell. i can so relate to this poem. the pain,the agony,the tears.

bforibus commented on Hurt and Pain

08-26-2009

it seemed a little inspirational in the begnning but i guess that made it all thhat more hurtful in the end great job

melanie23 commented on Hurt and Pain

08-20-2009

you really look for the true emotion behind it all. this has got good flow and is very deep. it makes one think of their own life experiences.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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