My Thoughts On Life...

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My Thoughts On Life...

Life is what you make of it,
Why not go,
Love it,
Work is fun,
When you wish for it,
Love is wonderful,
If you find it,
The cycle of life contains two things,
Birth,
A beautiful time,
Then there is death,
A sad moment,
Each day is not promised,
So live it to the fullest,
Manage you debt,
The tighter,
The better,
Everyone will come and go,
So you will never know,
When you can lose the best thing in your life,
When you do,
It's like a knife,
In your back,
So do not slack,
The world does not come free,
You have to work for it,
Do not be spoiled,
A little oil,
Will not hurt,
If you work,
For what you own,
You stand less a chance of getting burned,
Never cheat at anything,
Charma will beat you out of everything,
Everyone gets what they earn,
So if I was you,
I would look at what I am doing,
I would be concerned,
Nice guys finish last,
I do not really care,
All that really matters,
Is that I have finished,
Never quit,
If you do,
You will hit,
Rock bottom,
You will not ever have to many friends,
What happens in the end,
You go home,
As usual,
All alone,
Love is kind,
Love is blind,
It is always easier,
Just keep it out of your mind,
When you find love,
You will know it,
Where are the signs,
I am sure not reading it,
People will use you and abuse you,
It is always better,
If they just lose you,
Go out and party,
Live hearty,
Stand for our troops, They are what keeps you free,
Would you prefer to be,
Under another countries control,
I don't know about you,
I say HELL NO,
Yes our guys are dying,
The president didn't make them sign that contract,
So you need to think before you speak,
They know what they are doing,
That's my thoughts for now on life......

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BooTz commented on My Thoughts On Life...

08-26-2009

wow ray. this is such a heartfelt & real poem. i love it! ur expression of ur views is who u are. very well done!!

freind commented on My Thoughts On Life...

08-25-2009

4 a young man i think you got your head on straight . very nice write.keep it up

lillyrain commented on My Thoughts On Life...

08-25-2009

I like this poem really alot. I hope you keep writing.

melanie23 commented on My Thoughts On Life...

08-20-2009

i like the fact that your very straight foreward. you simply say it the way you see it. i like that.

Plot121 commented on My Thoughts On Life...

08-20-2009

The flow was good and the message quite clear. I think though a series of statements are good but need to have some more to agrue your point to the reader. I understand where your comming but I feel your just telling the reader what you think not explain why you think that way just a thought Robert...

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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