Death

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    Also an old poem, and just as a reference, the name at the end is not a particular person's name, just bud as in buddy....

    Death

    Yesterday is gone,
    Tomorrow will never come,
    Run B*tch,
    I've got a gun,
    It's dark,
    The moon looks eerie,
    You are amazingly weary,
    You have got something red,
    Pouring out of the side of your head,
    Including the mimes inside,
    You head,
    You hit the ground,
    With a pound,
    The moon gleams,
    With a grin,
    As she screams,
    Saying your name once again,
    Here is the next day,
    We are all having to pray,
    Then a thud,
    Have fun in hell,
    Goodbye Bud,

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    DarkChi commented on Death

    09-16-2009

    i like this one better than the other one. it's more my styal

    BooTz commented on Death

    08-26-2009

    wow...this is a dark poem. it's raw & expressive. i like it..i can feel ur pain.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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