Honesty

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    Honesty

    My mind racing,
    My hear pacing,
    Pain is lifted,
    Time is shifted,
    Patience has grown,
    The world is so unknown,
    You wonder why I cry,
    I am not an emotional guy,
    This I will not lie,
    I feel vulnerable,
    It's uncontrolable,
    I'm open to you,
    I am always true,
    Hope to one day,
    Be able to be with you,
    I find it funny honey,
    That's just when I think of you,
    Life is dark,
    The thought of you strikes a spark,
    As bright,
    As a light,
    Set on high,
    Every worry and fear just passes by,
    If I have to say good bye,
    Forever,
    I will not die,
    I sure will sit down and cry,
    I will be so very hollow,
    It will not ever be the same,
    You know it is a crying shame,
    I promised I would not get attached,
    Look at us now,
    Look at how,
    We are so very latched,
    On every thought of me and you,
    What can we do,
    All I can say,
    Is hey,
    You wanted honesty,
    I am being honest to you,

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    1990lh commented on Honesty

    04-19-2011

    very beautiful poem ray, you put your heart in that. this is the kind of poerty i miss, poerty with heart and feeling. not overly complicated poems that seem vain and empty

    loveswar09 commented on Honesty

    12-16-2009

    AW!!!! Beautifully romantic!!! =) It's good to be honest at times, but then again that's just the way I think. =) Good poem now post MORE!!!! Nah just kidding, you post more whenever you want K?

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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