Honesty

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Honesty

    Honesty

    My mind racing,
    My hear pacing,
    Pain is lifted,
    Time is shifted,
    Patience has grown,
    The world is so unknown,
    You wonder why I cry,
    I am not an emotional guy,
    This I will not lie,
    I feel vulnerable,
    It's uncontrolable,
    I'm open to you,
    I am always true,
    Hope to one day,
    Be able to be with you,
    I find it funny honey,
    That's just when I think of you,
    Life is dark,
    The thought of you strikes a spark,
    As bright,
    As a light,
    Set on high,
    Every worry and fear just passes by,
    If I have to say good bye,
    Forever,
    I will not die,
    I sure will sit down and cry,
    I will be so very hollow,
    It will not ever be the same,
    You know it is a crying shame,
    I promised I would not get attached,
    Look at us now,
    Look at how,
    We are so very latched,
    On every thought of me and you,
    What can we do,
    All I can say,
    Is hey,
    You wanted honesty,
    I am being honest to you,

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    1990lh commented on Honesty

    04-19-2011

    very beautiful poem ray, you put your heart in that. this is the kind of poerty i miss, poerty with heart and feeling. not overly complicated poems that seem vain and empty

    loveswar09 commented on Honesty

    12-16-2009

    AW!!!! Beautifully romantic!!! =) It's good to be honest at times, but then again that's just the way I think. =) Good poem now post MORE!!!! Nah just kidding, you post more whenever you want K?

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    Ray37342’s Poems (17)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    To Whom It May Concern 2
    Honesty 2
    Unknown 8
    Her2 4
    The Unknown 6
    It's All About You, 10
    Family Love 2
    Death 2
    Not naming, bc it's an ex... N i am taking care of her privacy.... 1
    My Thoughts On Life... 7
    If You Care 6
    Dear God 1
    Names 4
    Help 1
    Life #2 1
    Her 5
    Hurt and Pain 8