Life #2

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    Life #2

    Life is odd,
    Sometimes all I can do is nod,
    You can be brought down,
    Trust me,
    I hit the ground,
    I'm in debt over my head,
    Sometimes I wonder,
    What would it be like,
    If I am dead,
    I ponder,
    More than most,
    I will never give up,
    Even with me in a slump,
    Life is always cloudy,
    One form or another,
    There is no reason to be pouty,
    It can always get better,
    With the love from one another,
    The lower you get,
    The worse it will be,
    Believe me,
    So if you keep your head high,
    Keep a smile on and keep moving,
    It will always,
    GET BETTER...

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    melanie23 commented on Life #2

    08-20-2009

    its hard to believe that last line sometimes. but i agree that u must never give up. u must always keep trying. i enjoyed reading this

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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