Blood Red Rainbows

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    taken from my poetry show Emotional Rainbows''

    Blood Red Rainbows

     

    Cold shards of ice pierced

     

    The very centre of my heart

     

    The way you spoke to me

     

    Every word/ just tore me apart

     

    Blackened flames envelope me

     

    Shot from your callous blue soul

     

    I’m burnt to a crisp

     

    My feelings tumble out of control

     

    That love you had given me

     

    It was born in the wings of a dove

     

    You’ve shot it from the skies

     

    Blood-red rain drops fall from above

     I gave you my heart my very soul

     It was yours to keep from the start

     Now it lays battered and bruised

     You might as well/ finish ripping/ it apart

     I’d held you clasped to my chest

     Together we had been warm and strong

     In the cradle of these two arms

     That was where I thought you’d belong

     Now the thorns of reality tear at my flesh

     No more do I see loves red rose

     I am rendered a jokers fool

     I am left with a bloody nose

     No more will I feel my loves breath

     The life and hope it had given me

     Deep inside I mourn my death

     As I clasp a single black rose

     

    ©Philip Golding 07/08

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    LadyLuck commented on Blood Red Rainbows

    09-20-2010

    Love is not kind. Love hurts Especially the love that is thorned

    nam1292 commented on Blood Red Rainbows

    09-20-2010

    very vivid nice imagery, it kept me scrolling and anticipating the next line

    Po8ree

    09/20/2010

    thanks for your kind words

    Teardrops commented on Blood Red Rainbows

    09-20-2010

    sometimes love is just not right but i do know that a love for all times waits for you to find it A very wonderful poem thanks for the read Marie

    Po8ree

    09/20/2010

    your more than welcome

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

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