Angels Cry

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Dusted off for for Marie. Loch Garton is near Inverness Scotland. A must visit place

Angels Cry

 

I walk on nature’s carpet past pine trees; noble and tall

Straining my gaze to put name to melodious song bird

A swish of a branch; I turn to see a disappearing tail

Grass bubbles up from mother earth adding another dimension

In reverential ore I turn; catching sight of lichen on a tree

Rainbow colours; like coral from a tropical Northern Australian sea

Born by pine scent; I gaze upon mirrored water from Loch shore

Clouds moulded by sculptor’s knife, add tone to the waters skin

Long grass with the elegance of a ballerina; lacy arms pose

Her feathering costume spins on the spot; all framing a masterpiece

I sit on a log baring its wooden sole; at piece at one with nature

 

fingernails screech upon blackboard sending shivers down Garton’s spine

An Osprey’s call sends jagged sound-waves streaking across agree sky

Strikes me; no mercy; mobile phone’s ring forced back; sends it to shore

 

Angles cry upon Loch canvas mourning the intrusion upon tranquillity

Their droplets strike harps, play a sad tune; ballerinas dance

Nobody is aloud to see that which nature had proffered for me

A sadness creeps towards me; slowly; regretfully I turn to leave

Loch spirits see the regret in me; a sudden breeze ripples water

Waters mirrored surface returned; pine trees wave forgiveness

I am at peace; once again; free from expectation; time for me

©Phil Golding 05/06

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Angels Cry

10-12-2010

I can feel the love for this place in your words. Beautiful descriptions and expressions. I love the way you formatted..............E

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

REGINA2 commented on Angels Cry

10-11-2010

This poem is really deep. I had to read it twice. Beautiful job.

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Teardrops commented on Angels Cry

10-07-2010

This is beyond beautiful its seeing a waterfall for the first time or a rainbow that touches the tip of a stream . You made the nature spirit in me very happy thank you for reminding me why i loved Europe so Marie

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Chaos128 commented on Angels Cry

10-07-2010

Peerless descriptions, Po8ree, done with the appreciative attention of a naturalist. Illustrating the osprey's discordant scream with the font was an inspired idea.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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