Life is....

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I was reflecting upon the meaning of life, which triggered ths poem.

Life is....

 

Life is but a stage, and we the players,

Shakespeare would have us believe.

The question is who controls the auditorium?

Is it controlled through Government hand outs or

augmented taxation served up on befuddled legislaton.

 

Life is a randomised, unsolicited list of stage directions,

given as prompts regardless of consequence.

It’s the equivalent to being forced

to take  part in the blind tasting of a chocolates

not knowing which one is the laxative.

 

 Life is but a passing shadow,

a floating existence within the heartbeat of a dream.

Verve throws occasional lifelines,

that morph into tethered hot air balloon,

buffeted by an autumn breeze and lashings of rain.

 

 Life is to take life on, in one daring adventure,

facing challenges, despite the inevitable wind changes.

Taking life on gives substance to existence,

a chance to find that special love, that shared song lyric

that gives the rhythm to the strings of your hearts.

 

Life is a stopping place in a poem.


 

© Philip Golding 28/09/2010

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Teardrops commented on Life is....

09-29-2010

I truly love this poem and I believe you have hit all the bases thanks for a great read Marie

FranzJ commented on Life is....

09-28-2010

you have showen that life is many things - with or without controls

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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