Brick Wall

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    Brick Wall

     

    Its silence no words/ no words/ a total brick wall

    All our sons and daughters/ shot down/ just die

    Sit them on the wall / BOOM/ you watch ‘em fall

    They’re   broken eggshells/ Why you livin’ the lie

     

    Disin culture/ shamin roots/ I’m still your brother

    Be proud/ respect yourself/ you are who you are

    Get beneath the ground/ ROOTS/same as any other

    Celebrate your community/ now/ invite a neighbour

     

    Rivers of blood/ look at it/ its blockin up the gutter

    Flesh dropin/ its eating away/ a maggot infection

    Step up to the plate/ SPEAK/ truth you must utter

    Listen to my message/ hear me/ culture integration

     

    Raise the blockade/ say the word/ now build that bridge

    Be a teacher/ be pupil/ don’t matter your colour or creed

    It’s a people war/ ENGAGE/ peace flow over that ridge

    Be there for each other/ unite my brother/ plant that seed

     

    You have the power/ don’t ask/ make that right choice

    Blow it away/ remove that shadow/ stop all the killin

    Join our culture/ SING/ become one/ strong with one voice

    Workin to our choice/ we’re human beings/ we’re ‘Cultural Jamin’

    ©Philip Golding Feb 2007

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    Teardrops commented on Brick Wall

    10-04-2010

    I agree with rhymer it is like the peace marches funny they were alot of voilance and they called them peace marches thanks for the read Marie
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    Po8ree

    10/04/2010

    thank you my No1 American fan. This is going on now in an area i do community work.

    Rhymer commented on Brick Wall

    10-04-2010

    Reminded me of the peace marchs of the late 60's. Inspirational call to peaceful arms. 10 from me.
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