Starlight turns into Daylight

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Written just after a family visit to church

Starlight turns into Daylight

 

 

In the bible light passes all understanding

The vision is gives is somewhat commanding

And sometimes tasks are far too demanding

Then the light dawns his love is reminding

 

As starlight turns into daylight

He shows his vision for me

As daylight turns into starlight

He washes away life’s mystery

 

My world fell apart around me out of the blue

Questioned his wisdom, why me, give a clue

Been a good Christian, why for this was I due

Then the light dawns his love just right on cue

 

As starlight turns into daylight

He shows his vision for me

As daylight turns into starlight

He washes away life’s mystery

 

I struggled to come to terms, who planned it

I struck out all over I had not asked for it

Lord can’t you just take it away and remand it

Then the light dawns his love he just gives it

 

As starlight turns into daylight

He shows his vision for me

As daylight turns into starlight

He washes away life’s mystery

 

Now I share the lords vision that he’s given me

Empower others to access all parts of society

Help them rediscover a strength for all to see

Then the light dawns his love’s given unconditionally

 

As starlight turns into daylight

He shows his vision for me

As daylight turns into starlight

He washes away life’s mystery

As daylight turns into starlight

He washes away life’s mystery

©Phil Golding 18/12/2006

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Teardrops commented on Starlight turns into Daylight

10-06-2010

We as mortals dont know what God has in mind for us. He never gives you more than you can handle and there is a purpose to all that happens. He will show you in time loved the poem Marie

Po8ree

10/06/2010

I wrote this in 20 mins after going to church. The more I read this the more I believe God spoke to me that night

REGINA2 commented on Starlight turns into Daylight

10-05-2010

I liked your poem and understand more than you know.

Po8ree

10/06/2010

thanks for your kind words. I am intreged as to what more you know. Please write back.

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Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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