Hotel Pool

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    You know when you go on Holiday and no matter how early you get up ther is always somebody sunbathing.......... this rant poem is for you

    Hotel Pool

     

    Sun beds

    Baking trays

    Bags first place

    Firing squad

    Playing god

    Hit by rays

    Cancers days

    Stupid sods

    Spit roast

    Burnt toast

    Timer binged?

    Who’ll turn you when you’re done?

    Dripping in factor 40

    Hogs spit

    Couldn’t give a shit

    Sand, sea, pool fun

    Got your melanoma hun?

    Dive into pool

    Try to cool

    Bloody fool

    Harness effect

    More power to ray

    ‘Bing’, skin done

    Burnt to a crisp

    Hospital visit

    Hospital bed

    You and sun will you play?

    Maximise protection

    Love the shades

    © Philip Golding Sept 2007

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    Teardrops commented on Hotel Pool

    09-24-2010

    Yes i have said this so often and maybe that is why I dive when i go to the beach underwater only the fish ,coral and me . Great poem my friend Marie
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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