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    You

    I stood there when you walked into the room
    My heart literly skipped a beat
    Your muscular build, your handsome looks
    All clean-cut and dressed so neat

    You walked up behind me
    There, you quietly stand
    You reached down beside me
    And took me by the hand.

    A careless whisper
    A soft, deep voice within my ear
    Saying all the magical things
    My heart wants to hear

    I feel your strong hand,
    As you gently touch my cheek
    Making my heart melt so
    And my knees so weak

    I turned and looked deep into your eyes
    And fell completely under your spell
    I thought my heart leaped from my chest
    But I couldn't really tell.

    As you leaned towards me
    Your soft tender lips passionately met mine
    My heart stopped, the world stood still
    It was a moment froze in time.

    I've never felt in my heart
    The way you make me feel
    All the romance and tenderness
    It all seems so real

    Your only a fantasy in my mind,
    A dream I want to come true
    If it takes the rest of my life
    I'll spend it searching for you..

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    Charlie23 commented on You

    01-20-2010

    I love this poem! Was sent here per Londo to check it out, very much worth the search! Especially enjoyed the last stanza! Beautiful poetry!

    mamasan commented on You

    10-27-2009

    Wow, reading this poem was a real experience and no fantasy. I sure did relate to the words and the nuances thereof and swore that someone had read my mind........and discovered the secret love of my life. Quite a feat, haskins. I know that this piece of poetry was tagged as fantasy but I definitely was transported to that time (your fantasy) and it became a real memory lived and relived by me. May you be lucky as I was and find the person in that fantasy you wrote of. Although, I am not sure it was only a fantasy you shared......I believe you shared with us your true love........and may you enjoy that love forever. Amen

    haskins

    12/02/2009

    Thank you for you comment...I did share my true love with you...But it is only in my mind that he exists...I am hopeing that I will meet him soon...I dream of this man so much...Im so in love with him...But is he real? or just a figment of my imagination...We will see very soon...

    bandit1192 commented on You

    10-15-2009

    I loved this. Londo's poem Reply To You and his comment for your poem stirred my curiosity. I'm glad it did. Beautifully written. I hope your dream comes true. TS

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